After a [I] read the [去掉]？these 5 paragraphs, a question puzzle [puzzled] me. Is a fool man really unhappy, or oppositely, is a wise man really feel happy ?
According to my way of consideration, I think a fool man may has less question ［fewer questions］about his or her life, they may never worried ？about their future、their relationship 、their income level、their self-value、their intelligence and so on.
By contrast, a wise man may lose lots of Brains [?]to think about his or her life environment, be anxious about himself, even global warming. A wise man may be too clever to concern himself about everything happened in the world. That is a tried job!
Compare these two actors in the society, who you will choose to act? That is a hard but easy problem for me. But I hold [it]-–follow my heart. Because of [去掉]all kinds of happy feeling ［are］comes [coming]from your heart.
generally speaking, I do not feel the new words are big problem for me, but I need to remember the real meaning in the article. Think what the writer's think .[writer thinks]
Dear咣鐺鐺鐺？and？aohun:
Good for your writing and？peer evaluation. But next time try avoiding the simple Chinese expressions. The underlined boldface is mine which requires more consideration.
Deng
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？After a [I] read the [去掉]？these 5 paragraphs, a question puzzle [puzzled]
[after reading ] 也可以．
Is a fool man really unhappy, or oppositely, is a wise man really feel happy ?
［is the fool man really feeling ....]
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