showing off
In the paragraph 19, golden, glowing, glorious, may be the hot point in this paragraph, this three words are similar in means and APELL, why the author are use all three words to describe for her life? maybe is because her published poems. I think it also is showing off, but at the begining of this paragraph, the author said that "Now,I don't intend myself--I was showing off", It seems she will not showing off but the fact is Reverse. maybe it's another way to showing off.
Now, let's come to the paragraph 21, the author's mother took her first grandson to visit all her friends, it's easy to know that her mother is very happy because she has a first grandson, so she want share her happy with all her friends, it's a normal behavior for a kind grandmother, in her mind, she just enjoy the baby, and introduce her grangson to her friend with gorgeous smile. it's not showing off.
53kevin 10.1 //162//
In the paragraph 19, golden, glowing, glorious, may be the hot point [points]in this paragraph, this three words are similar in means [have the similar meaning] and apell{?}, why the author are use[uses] all three words to describe for her life? Maybe [it] is because her published poems. I think it also is showing off[it is also], but at the begining of this paragraph, the author said[時態不統一] that "Now, I don't intend myself--I was showing off", it seems[that] she will [be]not showing off but the fact is reverse. Maybe it's another way to showing off.
Now, let's come to the paragraph 21, the author's mother took her first grandson to visit all her friends, it's[時態] easy to know that her mother is very happy because she has a first grandson, so she want[wants]share her happy[happiness]with all her friends, it's a normal behavior for a kind grandmother, in her mind, she just enjoy[enjoyed] the baby, and introduce her grangson to her friend with gorgeous smile. it's not showing off.
