In the nineth(ninth) parapraph.(paragraph)Let’s see the competitive showoffs .(The)competive showoffs who must better than other (people)in anything .At first the writer used outshine describe the competitive. At the second he used five“---”in passage.It’s named dash .why DiD he used so many dash? Let us see the sentence of they have“more---expertise or even aggravation---and better---dentists or children or marriages or recipes ---and deeper---love of animals or cancern(concern) of human suffering .”We can get idea from here that competitive show offs want to better than other even in the falling ill .That’s very interesting .They don’t have the normal psycholiyy(psychology) Who fail in the future .It takes calamity to others.Because the person who’s ability is limited we can’t do eventhing (anything)well in any place .We always do that we are good at something.
Competitive showoffs are hell. We need to far away compettive(competitive) showoffs. I don’t like the competitive showoffs.
