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Good impressions are constantly given by the beautiful things and pretty persons. To some extent, they are really unavoidable to us. Taking the teachers mentioned in the position as the example, they are typical who attach more importance on appearance. They like attractive students, taking higher marks and more expectation on them even if they haven’t reached that degree. As far as I [am] concerned, that’s forgivable, because no one in the world is perfect. So, there’re many better things occurred on that fortunate people which may lose someone’s balance. In the next passage, a situation put me into a thinking trouble which is about the young children. They are disciplined to be more beautiful just because of the benefit it brought. I thinking I could saw it as a stereotype or a tradition, but I still suggest paying more attention on other things which are the same to average people, such as moral, behavior. Of course, the meaning I took above wasn’t the criticism about the beauty, it [is] just a point of my own view, and if the same thing confront me, I will do the same thing as others.

Good impressions are constantly given by the beautiful things and pretty persons. To some extent, they are really unavoidable to us. Taking the teachers mentioned in the position as the example, they are typical who attach more importance [important] on appearance. They like attractive students, taking [take] higher marks and more expectation on them even if they haven’t reached that [the] degree. As far as I [am] concerned, that’s forgivable, because no one in the world is perfect. So, there’re many better things occurred on that fortunate people which may lose someone’s balance. In the next passage, a situation put me into a thinking trouble which is about the young children. They are disciplined to be more beautiful just because of the benefit it brought. I thinking [think] I could saw it as a stereotype or a tradition, but I still suggest paying more attention on other things which are the same to average people, such as moral, behavior. Of course, the meaning I took above wasn’t the criticism about the beauty, it [is] just a point of my own view, and if the same thing confront [confronts] me, I will do the same thing as others.

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