After reading the fifteenth paragraph, I get a problem which I can’t deal with myself. I don’t know what mean about”(the meaning of“)the quiet mother of four with whom”. When I read the translation, I know that the mother have four children. But why(+dose) this mean? I can’t understand.
The author wants to tell us that(去掉) another group of showoffs and an outstanding woman’s story. The showoffs that are basically insecure have a strange mentality: They are afraid(+of) other person can’t see their accomplishment,(改","為"."或是+and) they will fell lost something. I advise these people to set up self-assurance.
I also filled(fill) with awe to this mother. In my view, she can elected(elect) to the state senate like a people gain a demo’s commissary in a province that in china. It’s a great accomplishment. And she can never even mention it when she talks with other person. I think I can’t do it.(去掉"."), and I(+am) also sure only a little person can do it.
Keep silence is better than showing off at the sometimes.