My opinions ofshowing off
As we know, the first sentence in paragraph one is very long, and also make(makes) me much attention to some words in the first sentence.
From the first sentence paragraph one, the author use(uses) intense, blazing, throbbing and criticizing to describe the woman, but why was the young woman spoke so emotionally at Wilson’s annual party? Of course she wants to make readers more attention to herself, and have something to speak, it also means showing off in this article. So I think it’s important skill of showing off, like to make a speech the first step must can make people attention to ourselves, then we can do the rest much better, because new we are the point of intersection.
Showing off is include(included) behavior, speak and emotion, and all of this is important. Totally a perfect showing off must is(is must) differently, because it can win lots of sights(sight) from our audience.
