Writing 2
After I read the first five(?) paragraphs of the article, I found that the words and the sentences are too hard for me to understand.
In order to comprehend these five paragraphs, I used the dictionary to learn the words which I don’t know.
Following words or sentences are that puzzled me:
1. happiness come with satisfying close relationships
2. happiness accompanied a life of intelligent reflection
3. preserving illusions
4. competing ideas relate to reality
5. exploded［explode] some myths
6. mid-life crises
7. typically rebound from
8. supposedly greater capacity for intimacy and social connection
9. This conclusion is grounded in scores of studies around the world.
And these are my apprehensions:
1. If you have good relationships with your family, your friends, your workmates, you will get happiness easier.
2. You can get happiness unless you have a good brain.
3. similar to have a dream
4. the opposite ideas approach to reality
5. expose some stories which is not true
6. there are many conjunctures
7. renew specially
8. be good at gam
9. this conclusion get from other surveys
From this five paragraphs, I know happiness is not depended on age, sex, and so on.
Dear huapiaoshi:
I am glad that you have written long enough to meet our length requirement, and that you have detected enough questions in your reading.
But...
why would you simply list your questions here rather than go a little further to try finding out some solutions to them?
I hope I can expect more from your next writing.
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