In the paragraph of twenty third, I agreed with the writer’s opinion of “exulting is shamelessly shouting our talents or triumphs. Let other people know that you have this technical, you can help them, and service for them .in the(刪掉) here the “shamelessly” is exaggerating for the showoffs. How did we show off and also make other people accept that who are showing off. It has three points for it. The first one（is ） that we don’t over does it and also we know when to quit. Let’s talk about the second point that we ‘are able to walk off the stage. But the third one is the most important of them that we need to leave the place for others to show off and leave the place for others to show off and give them am clapping .then(Then) everyone will sustain you .at (At)last we are allowed from time to time to exult.
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In the paragraph of twenty third, I agreed with the writer’s opinion of [about] “exulting is shamelessly shouting our talents or triumphs [”] Let other people know that you have this technical, you can help them, and service for them .in the here the [?] “Shamelessly” is exaggerating for the showoffs. How did we show off and also make other people accept that who are showing off. It has [there are] three points for it. The first one [is] that we don’t over does it and also we know when to quit. Let’s talk about the second point that we ‘are able to walk off the stage. [What’s more?]But the third one is the most important of them that we need to leave the place for others to show off and leave the place for others to show off and give them am clapping .then everyone will sustain you .at last we are allowed from time to time to exult.
