assignment6
After reading the secong [second] part of article, I found there were some parallel sentences. Let's take look at "and although we have been taught that it is bad toboast, that it is trashy toot our own horn, that nice people don't strut their stuff, seek at tension or name-drop. In this sentence, it has three "that" and express [expesses] something we have been taught respectively. The long sentence is very beautiful and colorful. what's more, many difficult words I have never seen such as "toot, strut, stuff and name-drop" which puzzle me. we [We] can use some collocation [collocations] that also [also移至"use"前] in these sentence in our life. I believe they will make our essay more [more去掉]necessary [necessarily] and sufficant[sufficiantly] . In the eighth paragraph, two "like" and two other "that" are also in it. The sentences which include them are also. [So DiD the eighth paragraph which includes two "like" and two other "that" ]As it is known to all, good collocation and sentsnce are the soul of every articles. 